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Caylor Glover's avatar

Love ittt!! Can’t wait for the next chapter 💖🎉

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Joy Peregrine's avatar

I'm so glad and thank youuuu! Fortunately, you do not have to wait long...next chapter is up!

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Nen's avatar

Oh when I get my hands on you Duke Venturd… you’re gonna pray Ev doesn’t bring you back to life!! (Sorry the dark romance books are getting to me)

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Joy Peregrine's avatar

He is a terrible person, that is for sure! 💔 Unfortunately, he's not the only villian...

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Bill Peregrine's avatar

How deep the web goes, and you've yet to begin to weave.

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Joy Peregrine's avatar

😈😈😈

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Amanda Webb's avatar

Poor Evelyn! Her uncle gives off major red flag energy. I just wonder WHY he wants her so badly? I fear he has some ulterior, not so nice motives.

Also I am in love with the section break design. It's such a nice touch!

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Joy Peregrine's avatar

Aw thank you! The section breaks were all Liam (posting as Bill, haha).

Yes, the Duke is THE WORST. And there's a whole parade of bad guys behind him, MUWAHAHA. It's a little bit of a slow burn to get there, but yes- there's more to be revealed!

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Amanda Webb's avatar

I cannot WAIT. Not me chomping at the bit for new chapters to drop!

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Ann's avatar

Ahhhhh this was so good!!!

This line. Wow! “ You’re thirty years old today. You’ll never marry or bear children. You’ve already sworn your life to the Church. Why not serve the gods in a place that’s safe? A place where you can still enjoy life and see your family well taken care of?”

“And what freedoms will I have?”

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Joy Peregrine's avatar

Ahhh! Thank you and welcome to the serial! I'm so glad you're here. And I'm glad this part resonated with you--- Ev has some dumpster fire-level stuff to deal with, for sure!

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theternaltbr's avatar

Duke Venturd is definitely the right name for him 🤬

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